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bowl of dust

I am sitting in the kitchen finishing my breakfast:
cheerios soaking up cold milk.
the bottom of the bowl holds infinite answers
to why you left me and why we can't make it.
a thunderous roar snaps my attention to the windows,
and a huge brown cloud, like nothing I've ever seen,
rips through the air. it seeps through the windows
and swirls around through the house.
I look down and I am only holding a bowl of dust.
My tears know it is the way things are.

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Inspired by the picture in the contest, and just by the phrase "dust bowl".

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  • Warrior-Eagle
    April 10, 2008

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    I thought this was well done,
    I like the descripion here,
    the tears,
    and that ending line ,
    thanks for entering my contest.

    ...Simply Me♥