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Great Romances of the afterlife

well i've been up here for to long
Since i have passed and gone
above the cloud where you can't see me
but i'm watching you right now

This place isn't so perfect
without the touch of your lips
but i have a plan so i'm coming for you precious

God let me just fall down
and let me have one last kiss with my princess
God I swear i'd trade heaven for hell
if i could feel her softness
God let me just fall down
God let me just fall down

So you're telling me this right now
that you'd trade heaven for hell?
Just to relive that first kiss
and the love of that girl?

Yes i'd give everything
to relive the memories
of the love we shared and
the way she used to stare

God let me just fall down
and let me have one last kiss with my princess
God I swear i'd trade heaven for hell
if i could feel her softness
God let me just fall down
God let me just fall down

So i'll grant you this one last wish
If you'd trade heaven for her kiss
Go ahead and jump down
Tonight you'll dine in hell

God i have Fallen down
Just to find that my princess is already dead
and i'm falling faster to hell
and i have nothing but pain ahead of me
wait whats this that i feel
I feel as though i was being carried
i look back and all i see
is my beautiful girl with angel wings

Never let me fall down again
you're the most beautiful angel in all of heaven

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  • SaMmYBabY
    April 9, 2008
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    I like this poem alot!!!

  • Virgoan
    April 8, 2008

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    This is nice. I like the lyrical tone of this piece.


    Thanks for sharing and keep writing.


    HENSLEY


    P.S.

    i think you mean 'too' long in the first line. Hope I am correct


  • Spiritual Soul
    April 8, 2008
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    Beautiful write, well done. Welcome to the site. Keep up the good work!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • kel dog
    April 8, 2008
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    well done