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End of the Line

All alone at the end of the day
The city lights are all shining below
I was thinking a little about you
Hoping you might even show
I have always been a dreamer (and dreams are what go around)
It's hard to change when I don't know how (keeps me on the ground)
And the thoughts of you seem stronger now
The longer you're away from me

So score my life to your music
Show me you're mine
And take me to the end of the line

We can talk about the things that don't matter
And we can spend all our time in a daze
But if it all fell to pieces before us
Would you still love me anyway?

So if you're looking for answers (just ask me how)
And if you're lost (and still asking now)
If you need something you can believe in
Will you come on back, just run on back
Say you're coming back to me

So score my life to your music
Show me you're mine
And take me to the end of the line

To the end of the line
To the end of the line
To the end of the line one last time...


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  • Kathraina silver member
    October 21

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    Wow! Wonderful job with these lyrics. I love the flow and concept of them. A very enjoyable read


    bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    July 17

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    I liked this. it was sweet and made me smile which was what i wanted, so I thank you, poet. keep up the good work! thanks for entering our contest and good luck!


  • DawnKestrel
    November 4, 2008

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    This sounds a lot like a song, and I like that.
    Good luck in my contest!


  • SoftlyScreaming
    June 25, 2008

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    this sounded more like a song.. i mean, it was beautiful, and i got where you were going with this, i liked it.. this just wasnt something that i cried to, or laughed my ass off too, or just got so emotional that it gave me inspiration.. thanks for entering, and good luck.


  • Heavens Child
    April 25, 2008

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    A nicely penned poem on love, and I must agree it reads like a beautiful song. Best wishes and thank you for entering


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    Your words tell a very good story of love, and how much you want it to work out for the two of you. I think the lyrics are great, and I can feel the music between the lines.

    Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!

    Ethereal One


  • calendar girl
    April 19, 2008
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    please please make this into a song, i will so buy it.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    April 15, 2008

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    The beautiful words of a love song...i can feel its sweet beat in my head...thank you so much for sharing with me and for entering


  • Beatles Girl
    April 9, 2008
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    This is too awesome. I have to take it in doses!

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