Satisfy my deepest cravingS
With a drop of flavor I once kneW
Each lingering colorful featurE
Entwines my tongue in love, passionatE
Touches the heart of why I eaT
Never seeming to die out or drowN
Each little sugar grain tantalizes mE
Sweet sugar cane, rich brown molasseS
Slips into my mouth like careful rose petalS
A contest entry
- Mirror Acrostics by LanguishedLad.
950 points, ended April 23, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Well done!
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Well I got caught up in that.. and my mind was going all sorts of places lol. Love how you made it about sugar cane tho..
Excellent
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this is so cleverly written. very cool. and it's very descriptive, which is also a big plus. great job on this!
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Very sweet (LOL). Cleverly written with a consistent flow. A most difficult challenge well done!
Ken
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Holy cow, acrostic-ness on both sides of the poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Molasses smells funny.
May your pencil never break!
~squirrel~
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