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Quiet Destruction

The houses sit in peaceful serenity
dust billows behind them
with roaring forcefulness
the hills are exploding
bombs are everywhere.
People see this at a distance
and they know no fear
because they know that
the bombs will not hit them
and they may not be next to be hit with bombs,
so they all watch the quiet destruction unfold in the distance.

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yeah its short but who cares!

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  • warrior-eagle
    April 10, 2008
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    I liked this.
    Thanks for entering my contest,
    I really enjoyed where you took this,

    ..Simply Me♥