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l o n g l o s t l o v e....

I"ll stay by your side
no need to hide for
I am your long lost love.

We hold eachothers hands
eat ice cream together
for you know we will
be together forever

You are my long lost love.

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  • Lyrics-Lover-Me
    April 26
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    Thnks

    I agreee, I should write a little more.

  • MurderScene--x
    April 16
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    o.O;
    It was good.
    But I agree with your sister.
    There should've been more. It would've made a lot more sense if you had.

  • OnEbAdApPlE
    April 12

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    this was okay

    i thought that you should have made it a little longer, because I think it would have been better and made a little more sence... but, other than that, it was okay... i could get connectd to it tho..


  • loves-last-angel
    April 10

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    Good Start . . .

    It is a great start! but .... I don't think you completely expess your message, but then again Great write
    keep it up,
    -Page <3

  • Lyrics-Lover-Me
    April 8
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