If I could just have one more moment with you
I'd love you with my whole heart as I already do
My precious child in my memories you'll always be
For you will always be my beautiful baby
My special moment with you was way to short
I grieve from my very gut needing others support
Never in a million years would I have ever thought
That I would loose you, my baby, I know you fought
I feel so alone without you here
I was looking so forward to your life my dear
This would now be my biggest fear
Please let me feel your presence, is ever so near
Grieving as your mother hurts so much
If only one more moment, I'd love on you a bunch
Holding you so dear to my loving heart
My heart you have had from the very start
My sweet baby I just wanted you to know
I never ever would have wanted you to go
Just know your mommy will always treasure you
Never to be forgotten this I'd never do
I shall share with others your tender little soul
Always remembering you in my womb, you would roll
The little touches of love between you and I
These memories will always be, with a gentle sigh
Your life only for a moment, for this I do cry
I have to believe we will meet in the sky
My sweet little baby you are so precious to love
In the eyes of eternity we will meet up above
A contest entry
- A moment in life. Part 1. by Angelflower.
1250 points, ended April 8, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Could you just imagine how painful this is?
Comments
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the emotion is strong in this poem. I love how you pour your heart out into words. I can feel how much you miss him and how you long to see him again. You also put hope into this write. It is good to see your back. Great job and God bless
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This is really sad and yes you are right he will always be with you love never ever dies thanks for sharing much love always be well
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DOn't Know How I Missed This One...
BUt it as all the others is exellently written with impeccable rhyming.Raw emotions expressed from your very gut and it screams out for Matthew in a way that only a mother could....He hears you Kelle and Iknow it breaks his heart for your pain...but When that reunion occurrs, the tears will be happy ones an the love will go on forever for we will all be part of that divine family of God!!!!Another sad but beautiful cry from a mother's heart!!!Love You Hon...~~Toni~~
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This is such a sad, heartfelt, poignant poem, Sis. Knowing as I do that this is written from your experience makes it even more meaningful.
Your sadness over your own loss lends authenticity to your words and will surely be felt by the mother whom the contest is for.
I wish you good luck in the contest
Blessings and love,
Dee
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Oh Sis
Thank you for I just hope that with all the support and comfort I've been given I may be able to give a fraction of that back to someone else whom is suffering. I just love you. Thank you for all your loving support and encouragement.
Much Love Always
Kelle Marie
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Excellent
What a beautiful poem for the contest. So very touching and well done. Thank you for sharing.
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This brought tears and sadness....but it's so important to always remember and cherish them and the little time you had together. Your pain is unimaginable to me actually never losing a child. I hope writing your beautiful poems eases it somehow.
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So very emotional and touching!! A fantastic write that touches the heart so deeply! Congratulations on the well deserved trophy!
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Touching.As usual it is from your gut....writing and healing
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This touched me deeply. It's so hard to lose a child. Chloe was only a grandchild so I know Susan is hurting far more than I am but my pain is so bad at times I don't see how anyone could be hurting any worse.
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Congradulations!!
Well deserving of a silver cup my dear! Such a touching poem from the very heart of a fine mother to her baby. Sets the soul on hold just to hear your words of love. Excellent job on this poem. Don
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Apart from wanting to turn a cat into slippers for deleting my comment just as i was about to post...... This poem has a depth inside the words of emotional expressive description which touches deep into the soul. It flows with love so smoothly as the rhyme pattern so free and natural. You lay bare your pain but in doing so you share all those beautiful memories with us. So you dear precious son is just always a heart beat away in your heart. Freely you give and I hope freely you recieve all the blessings from above as well as the love from the halls of AP. Excellent piece for the prompt. A very precious moment in life. I stand in applause
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Outstanding!
OMG Speechless beyond words! Very deep in emotion oh dear I am sorry. I don't know what to say that hasn't already been said I can't comfort you only wish I could my tears I cried while reading this piece cannot make things right. Thanks for sharing and take carex -
Oh Sis,
What a beautiful read this one is!! Soooo heartfelt and tender! This is truly beautiful!! I love it, I know how your heart feels..
You know where I am if you need to talk.
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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ohh sad very heartfelt
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Thank you !! oh thank you so very much.. I am crying right now.. But it's a good cry.. I love this so very much.. You have taken the words that I could not speak and have spoken them for me.. Thank you so much.. This was so beautiful.. There are no words on earth or in all the Heavens that could do this justice.. The emotions were so raw and intense.. I loved it very much... Thank you, I don't feel so alone now.. I thank you for that..
My heart goes out to you as well.. I know that this was more then likely not easy at all but you still did it.. Thank you!.. Great write..
Peace and love to you,
Jetleena
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