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Poem

I



            hate



how



 
            she makes me feel...




compared to


         



              how you make me feel.




I hate





              how different we have become



since we were last,




                  I hate




how we are together again....




                and I have indecision




to tell you the whole truth...




              a truth you will be afraid of.




I hate how



 

              we are just friends




and I want you....





              even though I am with her.





I hate how...



            I have spoke half-truth about myself and about her to you.

Author notes

Odd numbers - J
Even numbers- A

I'm sorry to say but I have a problem and a confession to tell A

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Comments


  • Together forever
    April 15, 2008
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    i dont kno why but i like this one alot.....a real lot i just dont kno why...


  • EmmaLuLu
    April 8, 2008
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    nice poem x