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Mom




            Mom you remember me don't you?
              I was once your little girl,
                Now a Mom myself with children.

            Why can't you remember anything?
              Resovling myself I see you can't,
                Because you have Ahlzheimer's.

            Why has the cancer spread throughly?
              Knowing your life with me is shorter,
                I already feel the loss of you in me.

            Mom you remebered me didn't you?
              Sitting there with you telling me
                That you love me very much Michele.

            Why couldn't I have been there on time?
              Standing looking at your still body,
                I remember the last words we said together.

                        I Love You Mom

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This is dedicated to my mother who past away over 8yrs ago and I haven't forgotton her love yet.

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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    April 9, 2008

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    An excellent poem about your mother. I am sure she is proud of they ways in which you show remembrance. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Angelflower
    April 8, 2008

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    Thank you so much for sharing this with me.. It was so heartfelt... I am sorry for your loss..
    Peace to you,
    Jetleena