Seashells – one of nature’s jewelS
Each unique in varied color and huE
A gift of love and beauty from the seA
Softly tossed and left upon the sandS
Hollowed and polished smootH
Each the reincarnation of a lifE
Left as a memoriaL
Liltingly acousticaL
Softly shussing seashell songS
Author notes
A mirror acrostic
(and a tongue twister too LOL)
Photo Credit: picture by mysticangel2003_2007 (http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/mysticangel2003_2007/seashells.jpg)
A contest entry
- Mirror Acrostics by LanguishedLad.
950 points, ended April 23, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
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Wow! now that is a nice imprint of the sea.
I like the short but poiniant message you have made. and the sibilance allitaration at the end really echos the sound of the waves washing the seashells to the sand.
This was great!
Bravo for the HM. -
Aww that is just lovely!! The words flowed effortlessly and the mirrored acrostic done so well!
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i like this poem. shells are one of my favorite things. this poem is lovely
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Beautiful!
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i love seashells! great job...great great. very nice how you mentioned acoustic and then used alliteration. awesome......good luck
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Very well done... You paint a such pretty picture here... Good luck to you!!!
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this poem is cool, i like the way it worked with the mirrored thing, and i like how you came up with so many words, good luck in the contest, and keep writing, -Amy
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good luck in contest! i like it and i also like the picture, it goes well..good luck again!
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