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The smell of roses

They say the roses smell nice this time of year

Beating down the tears with their scent 

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Each petal soaked with anticipation

Dying to absorb your breath with the instant flicker of your acknowledgment

  

 

 

They say the smell of roses brings tears to those who feel

Those who accept

Those who sacrifice

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  • Symphony
    September 23, 2008

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    Interesting; as sadness is not what we usually associate roses with!! Nice job on taking something new out of them :-)


  • Love-EroticPoet
    June 6, 2008
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    Beautiful write love lines three and four, they hold great imagetry


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 8, 2008
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    This brought some imagery to my mind.
    Well done!


  • Candy6
    April 8, 2008
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    Interesting. Good write.