Silence
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well done
very well captured, yet not over the top.
some who try to tangle with the tempting of flesh find folly with wordiness, and this has all the makings of a sensual swim without the undertow...
well done.
WSD
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Oh My Word!!
Drops fan
Oy~ You have painted a picture to soothe every sense and put someone in the hospital from overheating self
Love this sensual write
arms wrap about her waist
pressed lips upon lips to taste,
the honey waiting to pour.
Honeyyyyyyyy Hot
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This piece is strongly descriptive, but in a very sensual and non-graphic way, which lends a lot to a strong feeling of loving and tenderness.
Good write.
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VERY WELL WRITTEN
This is a perfectly penned piece of erotica that comes in a superior format,style,tone and mode of expression.You did a great job on the poem.All the best in the contest.
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very vivid description. Also tasefully done. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
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Wonderful words and imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Ken
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WOW! Well written! Love the wording. It has a good liquid flow to it! Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
~Donna~
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