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about "this place"

what is this place
so dark and damp
what is this place
it's really cramped

i wait and wait
days go by
i sit and wait
a woman cries

more days pass
how long have i been here
i can sense them now
the people near

THUMP THUMP THUMP
an earthquake has come
dont let this be
my last run

the pounding stops
a woman cries
snot comes down
im being baptized

days go by
i hear her cry
what is wrong?
her voice a song

what is that
what is that thing
it's raining down
it's hurting me!

my skin burns
my eyes bleed
all this time
i was a seed?

they're hurting me
do they see
i'm a person
just like ye

take it out
please oh please
this close to life
it was a tease

it hurts so bad
my flesh is raw
its burning me
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

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