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Fly Away

Fly away to your broken home
You know, the one you call your father's syndrome
There is plenty of room here for you to stay
Once again you fly away

There is no reason for you to care,
Only that I have a heart to share.
The reason I love you so much
Is only to sit, and feel your touch.

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  • Miss Masquerade
    May 9

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    i really love this work, it is so beautiful. the word choice and repition works so perfectly with the mood. awesome write!


  • OnEbAdApPlE
    April 12
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    i love it!i thought that it was one of your best

    pieces yet!!

  • OnEbAdApPlE
    April 8

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    i love it!!

    i love everything about it, except the fathers syndrome part was a little awkward..... three 4 attemptin!!! cya.