Diving out of airplanes is nothing I dread
Ending my imaginary solititude
Spending my time practicing jumps
I lose myself completely in time as I
Risk my sanity and relationships for
Endless chances for skydiving, I desire
Author notes
contest: mirrored acrostic anything goes
my first try at an acrostic - trying to branch out a bit from the ordinary.
A contest entry
- Mirror Acrostics by LanguishedLad.
950 points, ended April 23, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well done! I really like this... excellent acrostic and such a sense of adventure! Of course, I'd be too scared to do that lol.


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Nice job!!!


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you did a great job with this, i think mine were a little rocky at first, yours seems to flow well, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy
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Nice job. I like the way you handled this double acrostic. It flows well and has meaning. Nothing is forced.


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Aw, that's so cool!


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