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Desire

Diving out of airplanes is nothing I dread
Ending my imaginary solititude
Spending my time practicing jumps
I lose myself completely in time as I
Risk my sanity and relationships for
Endless chances for skydiving, I desire

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contest: mirrored acrostic anything goes
my first try at an acrostic - trying to branch out a bit from the ordinary.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    Well done! I really like this... excellent acrostic and such a sense of adventure! Of course, I'd be too scared to do that lol.


  • BehindTheShadow
    April 8, 2008
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    Nice job!!!


  • peridotPixi
    April 8, 2008

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    you did a great job with this, i think mine were a little rocky at first, yours seems to flow well, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    April 8, 2008

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    Nice job. I like the way you handled this double acrostic. It flows well and has meaning. Nothing is forced.

  • Punzel
    April 8, 2008
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    Aw, that's so cool!

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