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Tuesday: Vron said, write a poem Gill!

 

 

Miss Veronica or Vron [da do Ron Ron]

to those that know her; wanted a poem

 

so I obliged,

and we laughed

about Care plans and lack of enthusiasm

from others, who linger around the desk

looking good and looking busy

 

but not the 'late gang'

of course-

we haven't peeked on-line

looking at Jenni's new red dress

and the newly bought  'whore' shoes - she'll look bloody gorgeous

 

or made countless cups of coffee

and Bernard with three lassies in tow

all vying for his brews - bless his cottons

and socks and anything

else you care to mention

 

with all good intentions

the clients [guys] are waiting

to watch the football

- big match

 big detox

 

big times and big boobs

[oh, god not mine again!]

 

Jenni said- yes Yours! Miss Gill

 

 

and Vron, well .... she giggles

like a girl, and she has fried-egg boobies

Jenni has wants a Boob Job!

I told her no no no

 

and we all went to Rehab

 

 

Author notes

this was done on our coffee break! Oh bloody hell
bless my fellow colleagues Miss Veronica, Miss Jenni and Mr Bernard

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  • IronIcecream
    April 9, 2008
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    I think you have a big boobs fetish



  • Night Hope gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    Please tell Miss Vron we all said thank you, Gill. What a hoot. I like Amy Winehouse's music. Kinda reminds me of early Motown with some Big Band & alt rock thrown in the mix. Wanda


    • NurseChilly gold member
      April 9, 2008
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      hehehehheheh thankie Miss Wanda and yes I like Amy's style too....

  • Rowan gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    Brilliant! Some of us sorry penholders struggle all day (or days), and Gilly pops one off in 15 mins. ain't right I tell ya...
    sigh. But so damn fun to read!


  • Lucy.
    April 8, 2008
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    Love the poems about your work! So funny. I enjoyed reading this.


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    April 8, 2008
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    Hilarious!

    You've done it again! Far better than the telly. What a working life you have. Sol x


    • NurseChilly gold member
      April 9, 2008
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      hmmmm, well it is a source of inspiration but it's not always a hoot, not always .......

      thanks you,


  • Wandika gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    I like all boobs

    Especially the good laughs.

    Had to jump ahead of the other poems to see how you were doing. You are back on the job but having fun. Sounds good to me!


  • layla.
    April 8, 2008

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    you have gone bonkers!!! no no no... and we all went to rehab... LMAO!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!fried egg boobies!!! i had them.... and i miss them now... i am fat!!! oops too much info eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this gave me a laugh before sleep... BIG MATCH BIG BOOBS how gilly-ish hahahahha............. *drops dead laughing*


  • misselaineous
    April 8, 2008
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    bless em indeed

    perfect poetry


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    It just amazes me everytime I read one of your "work" poems how easy you make it seem, Gilly!! I just loved this one and I agree with Suzie about the comraderie, simply love it.

    LOLOL, my son would love this as he loves Amy Winehouse's music, lolol. But hey, you should tell them to go to rehab - and make more work for yourselves.

    Great stuff, Gilly. You are just amazing.

    ~ Nicolette

  • Shannon
    April 8, 2008

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    Yes, yes, best not to get a boob job! haha. I love your day poems--it's a glimpse into your life, which seems quite entertaining, or at least, that's how you paint it.

    It flows really well, too. I don't know if I could describe my day like that and have it flow so poetically.

    Now, where's the poem about Natalia?

  • Suzanne Dia
    April 8, 2008

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    I love this, Gill. The comraderie is so heartwarming, really. This poem is why I love women even when I want to slap them. Men don't interact like this. It is harder to find the gentle poetry in each interaction..

    Also, really nicely done with working Ms. Winehouse into the end of this. A fun twist, gives this just another layer.




    • NurseChilly gold member
      April 8, 2008
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      we were all singing along to it...

      hehehhehe

      nearly home time - yay!

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