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Don't Lie To Me

I said, if this is how it’s gonna be, then I quit.
I’m losing it
But I’m ten steps from the edge
Starting off at a run
Breaking my trust and my heart
Forever in this cart
Crashing on edge over feet
The wall and I waiting to meet
Turn away and walk so far
Knowing I can’t get in the car
I’ll do whatever it takes
Even while my heart breaks
Keeping you here
Despite my every freaking fear
That the comfort I finally found
Isn’t staying around
I said, if this is how it’s gonna be
Then do it, but please, stay with me

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  • Tybar
    March 18

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    I'm not much for rhyming pairs (just a personal preference), but I have to say, what really did it for me was the first line and the last line. Good job!