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nary a ripple

nary a ripple
moon mirrored in quiet pond
a sunfish splashes

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  • marlene47 silver member
    April 16, 2008
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    A beautiful moment you've described.
    Congratulations on the gold.
    Marlene


  • acari27 gold member
    April 9, 2008
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    wow you just have a way


  • Odd Thomas
    April 8, 2008

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    This is very a very beatiful haiku, I love fish and water, this paints the perfect picture. I wasn't expecting such a great aha moment either great job, gooluck in the contest