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The Twice-blessed Pixie

 

 

A twice-blessed pixie walked the forest path

Came to a clearing which brought tear-filled eyes

Charred embers spoke of magic evil wrath

From heinous scent of burnt flesh he surmised

This was a massacre’s vile aftermath

His mind could hear the victims’ frightened cries

But, knowing it was fruitless to enrage

This pixie knew to bless and disengage

 

Yet, something pulled upon his heart nearby

Making him pause, survey the flattened ash

He heard a gloomy, sad, sorrowful cry

Then reappeared next to it in a flash

There found a fairy too injured to fly

Upon each wing an evil magic gash

He gazed upon the scene fighting despair

‘Twas blasphemy to wound creatures so fair

 

 

 

 

 

“I’m Glynn of Mountain Pixie Clan

and I am at your service now.

Don’t fear as I extend my hand,

I’m Glynn of Mountain Pixie Clan.

I’m bound to do whate’er I can

to make you heal and smile somehow.

I’m Glynn of Mountain Pixie Clan

and I am at your service now.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Death

cold, inanimate

unfeeling, uncaring, unattending

motionless, eternal, incomplete, wounded

grieving, longing, yearning

lonely, lost

Life”

 

 

 

 

The twice-blessed pixie never had beheld

Such dark words from a loving creature fair

His cold detachment waned, compassion swelled

The pixie chose to link himself and care

An ache came to his heart, and his tears welled

And spying a lone raven in the air

Enchanted it to tell the story of

The horrors here of shattered fairy love

 

 

 

 

 

         

 

 

“The Goblins came, and this is what they did

They raged against the fairies of the wood

Inside the chestnut tree the fairies hid

Except this one who had misunderstood

 

They raged against the fairies of the wood

The goblin’s magic charred the chestnut tree

Except this one who had misunderstood

Who thought that they had all been told to flee

 

The goblin’s magic charred the chestnut tree

They did not see this single soul survive

Who thought that they had all been told to flee

So one last fairy soul is still alive

 

They did not see this single soul survive

Inside the chestnut tree the fairies hid

So one last fairy soul is still alive

The goblins came and this is what they did.”

 

 

 

 

The twice-blessed pixie conjured up a spell

To fix the fairy’s wings so she could fly

But, magic cannot mend broken hearts well

And Glynn did not know what else he could try

He closed his eyes and wished that he could tell

How he could bring new hope into her eye

It took a quiet moment, not too long

Then Glynn would softly sing to her a song

 

 

 

When evil shadows overtake my soul

My mind cannot consider all the pain

My heart is lost where light cannot console

I fear that I shall not know hope again

 

When love is just a word I used to know

And tortured memories my only friends

I feel there’s only one place I should go

To be at peace and reach desired ends

 

But, as I yearn for darkness I can see

That darkness is what I have now become

Light’s truth burns through this cruel insanity

I understand God, I will not succumb

 

In honor of all souls who’ve lived in good

My faith shines as a beacon through the wood

 

 

 

 

 

Upon the final words he sang so sweet

The fairy rose and stood not far away

She held his hands, unsteady on her feet

And then her head upon his shoulder lay

He felt her tears and sorrowful heartbeat

She cried there for a sad and joyous while

Then spoke to him and gave a pensive smile

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Despair

meaningless, forlorn

resigning, conceding, surrendering

hurt, lost, love, appreciation

wanting,  needing, serving

hope, trust

faith.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

A thrice-blessed pixie made his merry way

Upon a rare and most glorious trail

He keeps his word until this very day

Determined as he is he’ll never fail

His faith shines and keeps all evil at bay

Within his heart always good shall prevail

So ponder, as your own mountains you climb,

That goodness wins wars one heart at a time

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Dark Otter
    April 21

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    Geez, Allen!

    Exceptionally creative,

    You know how to please. This I look forward to pulling apart line by line. Your use of multiple forms for the various voices sits well with me. It is an attractive story that bears some close study for your formatting choices.

    Well done, sir!


  • echo-ink
    July 12, 2008
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    This was a wonderful *fairy* tale, loved it. good luck in the contest. D.


  • BlackSwan
    June 29, 2008
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    Beautiful drawings and stanzas! Wonderfully done
    -GL in contest


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    Such a charming tale told in word and pictures. I love the way it unfolds. You ought to put this in a book and market it in the fantasy section. You could do a sequel and develop the character more.


  • Griswold silver member
    June 7, 2008

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    Now this was pretty damn awesome Allan. I enjoyed it from start to finish, the presentation outstanding. Was very cool to see the different forms in one poem. Best of luck...Scott

  • Awsome!

    This was wonderful!! I cant stop reading it. This was a very good peice. Keep on writing.
    Loves

  • eternal-devotion
    April 9, 2008

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    Excelent.

    This is a most exceptional piece that you have written. There is so much thought and care within these words. This with would more to it make an exceptional book. There are some of us that would enjoy a book about fairies that is geared to the adult mind. Your work has that quality within it and is so very wonderful. It is first rate and I truely enjoyed the reading of it. The pictures and the way it is laid out enhances the viewing of this to an absolute wonderful degree.


  • Saint Irial
    April 9, 2008

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    Completely awesome, well written, engaging the reader and keeps that person in a tight grip until the end. a masterpiece =)


  • forgotten Emo
    April 9, 2008

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    awesome!!! (continued)

    Also I would like to say that you have a gift with the way you werite and you do very well with your words. Never forget that words can open up a part of a person the they never knew existed. Don't forget that so many people take this for granit. And in times of hard. turn to your literature because it is a path way to your heart.

  • forgotten Emo
    April 9, 2008
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    Awesome!!!

    I loved it!!! It was so full of truth and you could feel the faith, pain, and caring in the words. It was fantastic!!! keep writing!!!


  • maa gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    oh, I truly love this pixie-tale …
    a smile came to my lips when, suddenly, the twice-blessed pixie became a thrice-blessed pixie … there is a lot of wisdom, magic and guidance in your story-poem … I have inhaled a part of it, letting the rest follow at its own pace …
    I love the ending when you give this wonderful advice :
    “So ponder, as your own mountains you climb,
    That goodness wins wars one heart at a time “
    I thank you so much to have written this enchanting and delightfully touching poem especially for my contest, and, probably, you might have thought of maa when letting your inspiration flow … so this is an extra precious blessing for her …
    you’re a magician who knows how to use his art in service to those who are sensitive to it …

    maa


    • PerVirtuous
      April 9, 2008
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      I did write this for your contest. Thank you for accommodating me.


  • SaintSorrow
    April 9, 2008
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    Wonderful

    I liked the entire message of this piece! It was utterly wonderful.

  • carole21
    April 9, 2008

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    very nice

    a long write but very nice and well done . . liked the message . . also liked "Charred embers spoke of magic evil wrath" and "goodness wins hearts one war at a time" . . good luck in the contests . .


  • I will stand by you
    April 9, 2008
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    this is a great write. I loved the fairy's power to heal the fairy that felt so broken.


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    A wonderful presentation you have created on this page - background, poetry, pictures. Classical faerie tale you have written with these lines. Best wishes in this contest. Spellbinding.


  • malmadre gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    sheer artistry! similar to opening a gift box and finding treasure, and then under the wrappings finding yet more, each one found with an aaaahhhh!
    The background is striking!


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    I love fairy stories. I am entered in the Fairy tales poem of 100 + lines. Good luck to you in your contests.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    April 9, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    Speechless..... amazing, beautiful, brought tears to my eyes!


  • dogncat63
    April 8, 2008
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    This is an amazing poem/story....I really liked it


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    This was a very lovely piece.
    Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you in the contest.

    Passions


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 8, 2008
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    Wow...


  • myrataal silver member
    April 8, 2008
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    Intriguing story ...

    and very true to your nature as a narrative writer. I enjoyed this.

    Love
    Always Myra


    • PerVirtuous
      April 8, 2008
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      Oh, my. Hmmm. Thank you Myra. I know this is not your cup of tea.


  • Ithica silver member
    April 8, 2008

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    A wee bit of fairy dust and a whole lot of fantastic!!! This is, as Amera said, destined to become a fairytale classic... I had to do a double take too, as for a moment I swore I'd found out your secret ingredient... Smokin' up the BACKGROUND... but my eyes had deceived me... Hmmmmmm!


  • Amera gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    This is nothing short of fantastic. Your amazing talent of storytelling combined with mixed poetic forms here is bound to become a fairytale classic. You already know I love this kind of fantasy, magic and spells; well, you went way beyond the miraculous with this delightful read. I love it!

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • PerVirtuous
      April 8, 2008

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      You look buff these days! YOu been working out? Thanks for this most awesome comment. It is loved, like you.


  • rhondasail
    April 8, 2008
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