Bathed in the warmth of your peaceful presence.
Illuminated by your gaze.
Shadows fall beyond temptation.
Solace beckons.
Serenity reigns.
A contest entry
- Window of Light - 20/20 by Gypsie Ink.
300 points, ended April 8, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful!
This is so peaceful...warms me like a soft blanket.
Thank you again for your entry. -
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Thank you, I appreciate your feedback... I was a little concerned that it wasn't commented on but there were a lot of entries!... Apology accepted and thanks again...
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I Am Sorry
I would like to apologize for my rudeness and disrespect. I did not make the time for a comment on your entry into my contest and would truly like to rectify that. Please forgive a Gypsie in too much of a hurry. This will not happen again and I am deeply appreciative of your time and effort for my whims. I do hope that I see your ink stain my pages again and your forgiveness as well. Again I am deeply sorry for the lack.
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