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Transformation

Just when you think you are at the end of the line
There's always one option to give you the time

So sure you are it's all over and done
But heres where you are all wrong

Be happy with what you have
and perhaps life will bless you more

Transformation is a wonderful thing
All that it teaches us to be.

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    Touching & endearing!!!

    I love that you can say so much in so few words...
    Very uplifting message & wise in its sentiment...
    Transformation denotes change & its great to believe that people can as they aspire to better themselves as human beings...
    Another great write you have here...
    Well done!!!


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    TY for being inspired by the prompt and entering
    Best wishes in he contest

    Lynda