Someone tell me why when i see him my knees go weak.
He lied.
He hurt.
He left.
Tell me why i still love you?
I dont quite understand it myself.
I disaprove of your lifestyle
your drug use.
your language.
your disrespect.
The way you mock everything that has the guts to be different
I hate it.
But i love you.
You cause my pulse to quicken,
my heart to jump, my spirit to soar.
you said you loved me once, not too long ago.
so tell me why you hold her hand now,
and why I care?
Author notes
my APname is ClandestineKiss, and i chose options 1 and 6... i am not at my own computer right now but will add a (hopefully awsome) background later asap.
A contest entry
- Choose Your Destiny... by Re-invention.
950 points, ended May 9, 2008, 56 entries
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Comments
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well from what I've read, this is a marvelous work love, you've described true feeling and that I love of poetry, feeling... the ending was astounding even though you wish to add more, you've made quite a stanza... wonderful! thanks for entering!
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