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Daughter Mine

She became
what I became
soft to touch
curves and such

Her vibrant eyes
took me by surprise

And I knew
it was only you

So take my hand
walk with me
into the dark
the vast blue sea

My love will grow
And love with show

Daughter mine,
don't you die,
It's all for you
All I do.

Take my love
Keep it safe
it will keep you
fall from grace

I know you won't
An angel within
Beauty's petals
on the wind

Hold me close
don't let go
I can't lose you
This I know...

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  • Avendesora Dreamer
    April 8, 2008

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    wow...this little poem tells many stories all of them sad, all of them beautiful. well done

    thanks for the entry and good luck!