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Fisherman

Standing in water so clear.
I have nothing to fear.
Fish are biting,
birds are flying,
trees are dying.
This is autumn
The most beautiful season of all,
off the trees the dead leaves fall.
I could stay here continuing to fish,
within the beautiful water,
I wish

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    April 24, 2008

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    awww... What a nice take on the picture.
    Oh I so want to go fishing. Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • KayJay
    April 8, 2008
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    Very Good!

    Great literal take on the prompt. Nice rhyme and flow. Good luck in the contest!
    Ken