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Death's Final Breath

Although I know not where I go to,
I feel it's my duty to tell you
As I'm pulled toward the ether
You must know that either
That wallpaper goes, or I do.

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Wilde's final words were "Either that wallpaper goes, or I do." It wasn't on the linked list, but it's my favorite Wilde quote.

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  • pieplate
    July 11
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    Yes, mine too--and si non e vero, e ben trovato! A good idea to use Wilde to provide the kick that a limerick needs for the finish.

    Since you care about metre, would you mind if I told you that your lines don't quite jibe for me? For instance, for this as a limerick, line 5 needs an extra two syllables ("That wallpaper goes, or else I do").
  • AHHH, How I know this feeling weel. I have seen many a papaer that I shared this feeling with you. I enjoyed this piece very much. Got a real chuckle out of it.


  • passim silver member
    May 13
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    He's going! I prefer to keep the wallpaper lol. I like this little piece. Well done


  • NeonRose silver member
    May 2
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    Always like that quote myself. Congratulations on an HM.


  • WomanWriting
    April 12
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    I can certainly understand.
    Good wishes to you.
    WW
  • I love that qoute as well. I can only hope that my last words as as humerous and filled with acceptence as his were. I really need to read some of his work, rather than just his quotes, though.

    • Epistomolus silver member
      April 9
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      Yesh, to be that lucid and peaceful at death's door is something we should all aspire to.

      If you haven't read much of his work, I'd start with The Importance of Being Earnest. I think it's his wittiest work, and really shows his gift for wordplay.

  • santonix
    April 8
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    i like it i really do

  • You have SO captured the quote. Love this... Good luck in the contest...

    Lady D

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