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Enter Stage Left

Nerves tear furrowed lines
Across her tender brow,
As stage lights blind innocent eyes
And illuminate the painted face of fabrication

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Prompt "First time--first show"

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  • nevadapoet
    August 23, 2008
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    Nicely said.


  • Three Doves
    April 8, 2008

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    A great take on the prompt. Spoken as though you have performed on stage or at least that's the impression I received. Either way good poem. Peace in light and love.
    Noah


  • Purush
    April 8, 2008
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    All the best,

    VERY VERY NICE CONCEPT
    All the best in my contest