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Glass, Tin and Mercury

Shattered, but perfectly formed images;
The reflection;
The fallacy in truth;
Millions of faces;
The devouring Mirrors;
Storm the lies there.
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There lies the storm;
Mirrors, devouring the faces of millions;
Truth in fallacy;
The reflection;
The images formed perfectly...

...But shattered.

Author notes

I THINK (though I may be wrong) that this kind of poem is called a palindrome...the same forwards as it is backwards? Yep. With many, many semicolons.
For the contest - Option 2, I think

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  • aaaaaaaa
    April 26, 2008
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    Thanks for the entry, I enjoyed reading it! good luck.