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A Mother's Cinquain

 

 

 

 

 

child's eyes
portal to truth
holding the innocence
adults envious for losing
passion

pure soul
shining so bright
approving looks assure
happiness from simple pleasures
parent

foot steps
from tiny feet
not a care in the world
investigate a whole new world
secure

embrace
baby's soft skin
holding them close to me
their smiles motivate me to be
happy

offspring
my perfect three
fulfill my life with love
delicate hearts that beat with mine
content

child's eyes
shining so bright
not a care in the world
their smiles motivate me to be
content

Author notes

Dedicated to my three children

a cinquain garland

whispernthedark

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Comments


  • RX-Queen
    July 16, 2008

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    Very well done, a truely beautiful and touching write and what adorable children. Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • acari27 gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    You know I dont have kids and I find theres a large divide between parents and non parents, but the way you write about your children is simple and lovely

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    April 8, 2008
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    They are beautiful


  • individuality gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    yeah this form is a good one, i have a few written, i think they flow and look much better than the single cinquain, a loving piece here for your children, it is bright and smiling