I take a walk outside
And smell the sea bourne air
In comes the crystal tide
I have never seen beauty as fair
And had my heart filled with pride
For this majesty of glowing coral sea
Colours all around of a sight
Colours that few have ever seen
And when the moon hits right
Your heart is filled with glea
As all of nature comes to you
Its Beauty from the deep
You see the creatures of the blue
As you begin to weep
You turn and say adieu
To the places of your sleep
A contest entry
- Take me to a beautiful place by Yellow-Rose.
600 points, ended May 15, 2008, 35 entries
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Comments
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This is a beautiful poem. My favourite line is:
'In comes the crystal tide'
Thank you for your entry
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