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You Can't

You lookeddd into my eyes
You toldddd me you loveee me
All you wantedddd was to playyy with me
Like I was yourrr doll
That youuu could break
I looked at you
&&& Saw all yourrr liesss
I will nottt let youuu play with meee anymoreee
I wasn'ttt yourrr doll
You can'ttt breakkk meee
You wanted me tooo cryyy
You wanted me tooo cryyy
I will nott cryyy for youuu
Youuu wanteddd me tooo fall
Youuu wanteddd me tooo fall
I will nottt fall for youuu

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  • ddrbaby1221
    May 6, 2008
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    that was great

    it's sad but god i like how you interpreted your feelings into it...


  • killa
    April 8, 2008
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    GOOD

    THIS IS A GOOD READ,FOR THE OPEN MINDED!