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Assertation

Accosted
by my quondam self,
repelled, in candent shame,
I affirm who I have become.

Author notes

15 words

Quondam - former; Candent - white hot

A contest entry

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  • peridotPixi
    April 8, 2008

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    i like your take on this promt, i like the big words that say so much great word choice good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy


    • KayJay
      April 8, 2008
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      Thanks Amy... appreciation is always welcome!
      (and I did provide translations of the "big" words LOL). Not everyone wants to run to Dictionary.Com to figure out what's being said!


  • Tattboyspet
    April 8, 2008

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    hmmmm ... and might that be a dancing skeleton?
    lol!
    thank you for your entry