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Mockery

When tides,
meets the rocks.
There's a trembling
resonance.

When tides
meets the shore.
even sounds
learn to be timid.

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  • quantumsurveyor
    April 9, 2008

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    I like the imagery here - rocks the political world, shore, the real world??? But can't link the title in - guess I am all shot to h*ll anyway LOL