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Lost In Thought

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Subtle, the charged air
scented in clean-
braced against soft fabric
lifts tendrils
hues of life..

Threatening, like the power
of the skies..
so opaque, in ravishing sweep
shatters the illusions
of perceptive nature
upon bent brow..

Intrepid gaze follows
the line of ivory-
goosebumps that creep
even as she is lost,
her thoughts masked
by nimbus suspension..

craving warmth
through tide's touch
gentle pull tugs at foam.
silken seams lift,
taunting and bold
when desire dawns..




Artwork by: Mark Spain

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Thanks for your patience..
Here is the link for the picture by Mark Spain:
http://www.collect-art.com/view-picture.asp?work=5177

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  • Amazira
    April 19
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    Very powerful

    So good. I'm just going to enjoy it. Your words flow with great depth. Well done, poetess.


  • zochit2me gold member
    April 19

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    Very soft flowing and beautiful. A floating kind of feeling comes to me while reading this.

    Becky


  • toomysterious
    April 15
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    Excellent.

    Absolutely lovely. The picture is gorgeous and your words give it life.
  • ambergriss gold member
    April 15

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    Lovely write and I went to Mark Spains work and wow, he has some great stuff. I snagged some too
    glad you shared this.


  • maralisa gold member
    April 15

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    beatiful poem craving warmth through tides touch gentle pull tugsat foam silken seams lift good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this with the group

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