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Beauty Unseen




Among the castoffs of life
lay the stuff of artistry
awaiting the stroke of discovery.




©2008
4-8-08




Written for the contest: Contest Quickie - picture and 15 words by Tattboyspet
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2399525

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Picture by: pub stills

Written for the contest: Contest Quickie - picture and 15 words by Tattboyspet
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2399525

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  • Elvenfairy
    April 18, 2008
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    well for a fifteen word only poem this was beautiful.


    • Elrenia
      April 18, 2008
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      Thank you. I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment.


  • simplefarmgirl
    April 11, 2008
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    Ooooo!!! I love what you packed into 3 short lines. Amazing!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    I am in lost in thought,
    great job.

    wishing you all the best in the contest.

    Passions


    • Elrenia
      April 9, 2008
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      Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate them and the applauds.

      rous


  • Tattboyspet
    April 8, 2008

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    ~nodding head~
    amazing what the imagination can see isn't it?
    thank you for your entry


    • Elrenia
      April 9, 2008

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      Thank you for taking the time to comment. And, for the placing. I am glad you liked it.

      rous

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