Take away the words
Of the beating pressure
Take away the pain
From the upset loser
In a lost
Bleeding soul
Unfortunate
Out of control
In a nightmare
Kissing daggers
Cold on my lips
Nothing compares
Take away the words
Of the beating pressure
Take away the pain
From the upset loser
Feel the blade
At my fingertips
Dancing blackness
Has begun
Beautiful
My worst fear
Untied
Undone
Break
Time to break again
Take
Taking in
This is the end.
Take away the words
Of the beating pressure
Take away the pain
From the upset loser
A contest entry
- Bullies - Victim's point of view by Moon Raven.
450 points, ended May 31, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Very good. The wording and form of this poem is well done. I like the one word lines. It adds a touch of insanity. The effects of being bullied. At least that's what I get from it. Well done. Thanks for the entry.
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this feels like a bully poem. about how a geek/loser feels when ppl bully them. love the use of words here Please check out my poetry too thank you x
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