You,
You are like a butterfly
So beautiful,
A grown man would cry.
Moonbeams,
Your face glows with light
Shining with laughter
That rings pure and white.
Oblivious
To the joy you give,
Just watching you
Gives me will to live.
Happiness,
The life you portray,
Smiling when you
Don't know what to say.
Sunshine
The rays in your eyes,
Eyes of a child
With wings of a butterfly.
Flowers,
A fragrance drifts by,
Sweet as the melody
You brought from the sky.
Angels,
Harps ring from above,
I'll never forget
Your unconditional love.
So fly
Spread your wings to the sky
Taking to heaven
You've never soared so high.
You'll go,
I can't hold you for long
But as you take off
Remember this song.
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A contest entry
- Innocence by just-an-amateur.
700 points, ended April 20, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Beautiful Things by Celticjedi.
600 points, ended August 6, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I can tell you wrote this straight from your heart, which is a deep place filled with love. You did a wonderful job on this piece, it really brings out the warmth in a person. The flow was off in some places, but other than that, keep it up. Thanks for entering, and good luck!
~Cj
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Wow this is a beautiful poem.. wow... It really lifts my mood... I now feel happy! thanks!!
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I'm not sure if this is directed to a girl or a guy (I'm guessing a girl) but it's beautiful. You truly left your heart here where hopefully this person will find your words of sweet purity and wisdom. Though your rhyme went a little cliche at times it was still heartfelt none-the-less.
~M~
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