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Get a life dammit

Work my lover,

 

               Toil, my friend,

 

Time non existent,

 

               Romance a dream,

 

when paper-clips dance.

 

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Artwork: pub stills

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 8, 2008
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    Lmao wonderfull penned poet.
    Best wishes to you in the contest.

    Passions


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    April 8, 2008

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    Love the pic and it compliments the write perfectly...or is that the other way around?

    lol

    **Master Ktulu**


    • Corvus Corone
      April 8, 2008
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      well think that is a two way street so ... depends which side the road you on Bro lmao

      xxxx


  • Tattboyspet
    April 8, 2008

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    lol - enjoyed the fact that the skeletons were seen as 'paperclips' ... work is for the boring class isn't it?
    thank you for your entry

    • Corvus Corone
      April 8, 2008

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      work maybe boring, but when you let it rule ya life something is very wrong. Actually rereading this reminds me of my step dad he was a workaholic... wondered where that thought come from lmao.

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