When I inhale
breaths
I check them up
for damaging thorns
and for their rosy softness
only to keep me healthy all the times.
When I exhale
I never mind to
add concentrates
to already harming
pollutants
thus deteriorating the
changed stances
to their possible worst
Author notes
The Prompt: "Every breath exhales onto a changed world"
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