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Sweet deserts


Deserts without water
bear lot of sweet fruits
marshy lands grass

scorching heat
distil sweet taste
cutting excess hidden

scarce left
dry parched lands
sweet that remained

A contest entry

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    April 10, 2008
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    well penned.
    Best wishes and good luck


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    this is a lovely write. You are doing well with the haiku's and always have something great to say in so few words. Well done and all the best for the contest.