He heard her crying
sad sobs
Asking for the lord
sad prayers
He entered in
battle began
Swords were raised
he attacked
Mastering tools
he slayed
rescued damsel in distress
Author notes
word limit to 30
A contest entry
- PIF 15 poets 20-30 words by poppa.
1050 points, ended April 8, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a nice piece, your words paint a picture
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This is a nice piece, your words paint a pictur
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Nicely penned
Now I have seen the image it speaks volumes
Good luck to you in the contest
Julie
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Aww.. yay.. he resuced the damsel in distress!! Yippee... love it!
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