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Haiku 114

on pawn shop shelves lie
the extravagances of
former better days

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  • Odd Thomas
    April 8, 2008

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    in haiku, you try not to use words like "of, the, and, but", but youve shown that you can have a very beautiful haiku using those kind of words, this is really good, great job, i can see you have written haiku alot before this