silent walk
through jaded mauve
with thoughts that imbue
my mind, while amethyst
weep tears of gold,
remembrance filters
through
instill within
my mind
Peace, and
saturate me
with Tranquility
that will infuse
reflection and hope
stretching past memories
Author notes
Picture: Pond Of Enchantment by James Coleman
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by jasminerose.
850 points, ended April 19, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such tranquil sighs of splendor release from your beautiful imagery!! A lovely and most enjoyable entry for my contest!!
Thank you so very much for entering this beautiful piece!!
Jasminerose
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lovely write of the picture, a scene that brings inner peace and joy without cost or work. truly many beautiful things created by God.
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Your emotions painted in colours only the few can truly see.
As a poet you become the painter, for as I read your words, the bare canvass of the day, is filled with beauty.
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What a beautiful scene you have created here Fran
i love this metaphorical write.
This was very calming to read.
Dolores xx
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A poem filled with metaphors ...
the path, the river, willows, bridge and Light!
path ... thoughts, mind
river ... saturation of tranquility
willows ... weeping and tears
bridge ... memories
Light ... hope
Wonderful, hopefilled poem. I loved how you incorporated the picture into your frame of reference.
Goeie-môre, Vriend!
Myra
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