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Vigorous tyrant of lost frivolous souls
Galloping calmly to await my demise
I don't sit with him often...
.......he keeps me on toes

Deep velvet flames --
Engraved in his eyes



Galloping calmly to await my demise
I drink to his presence - The ( hope to forget)
Velvet flames engraved in his eyes
Wishing you away, how loathsome is this


I drink to his presence and hope to forget

Memories of life
I just can't leave in the past

Wishing you away, how loathsome is this
( Just kill me) - It's not in me to ask


Memories I just can't leave in the past
I never sit, He keeps me on my toes
(Just kill me) - It's not in me to ask
Vigorous tyrant of lost frivolous souls

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"hurry up, take your time, the choice is yours, dont be late" [nirvana/kurt cobain]

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  • righteousme
    April 10, 2008
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    good write.. good luck in the contest...


  • brittany lee
    April 8, 2008
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    VERY interesting.
    Thanks for entering the contest!