Ahh,the rain,
The cool and wet.
Sends little rivers of diamond gloss,
Fresh from the heavens.
To out stretched hands and dusty skin,
To calm the cracked earth.
and comfort the thirsty greens,
To pool and stay around for a day or so.
then ever so slowly go with grace,
Disappear drop by drop to return.
To the vast expanse of sky,
And fall again some other day.
Unexpected,
But welcome.
I love the rain!!
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ooo... Made my mouth water... Heh... I love the rain too - I really love how you described it here... Kinda like a healing force.
Very good... hehe... Keep penning!
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Thanks Perception
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this brought alot of peace at heart and your totally right--> "Unexpected, But welcome." is totally right cause i love the rain! Great Write! -Gore
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Thankyou so much :-)
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I really liked this.. It's sweet.. I love the rain as well. The smell after a rainfall is so sweet and peaceful... Great write I really enjoyed this..
Peace to you,
Jetleena
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Refreshing description of the rain cycle. Your use of imagery is great here. "Sends little rivers of diamond gloss" is a line that stands out for me. One tiny nitpick: you misspelled "disappear" in the tenth line. Other than that, it's a very solid write.
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Thankyou for the heads up!!
How do you edit you poems? I would like to change the spellin gbut im not sure how to. Im new.. -
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There should be an edit link on the right.
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Cheers
Thankyou so much :-)
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