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A Boy

A boy doesn’t really care.

He walks alone regardless of the fact that

She walks behind him.

He walks away

Regardless of the fact that she calls to him.

He walks, because he doesn’t know better.

 

Then when all words fall flat,

Only she will try again.

‘How will you commit me to memory?’ he asks.

Shoe shuffles break no awkward silence.

‘I won’t have to commit you to memory; I don’t intend to ever forget you’ says she.

 

Tomorrow he says

‘I’m falling in love with you, and it is terrifying,

But I wouldn’t let it go if it cost me my life’

And yet he still walks away.

What is he holding if it is not her?

 

She walks behind him

Only because she knows that 

Sometimes people build walls not to keep others out

But to see who cares enough to break them down.

 

Slowly she catches up,

And her fingers fill the spaces between his.

A boy slows down.

Author notes

This one is really random. It feels like all my thoughts just poured out off my tongue. I like it though. I might edit it a little after the contest is over.

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  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 20, 2008

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    lovely

    This is a very sweet poem. I agree with your reasoning, a lot of times the woman does have to be patient until the man finally realizes he can trust her.

    Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!

    Ethereal One