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Closer

Her back,
In open dispute with her heart,
Moves closer.



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A contest entry

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  • Meroza
    March 31

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    A very interesting write. A little short is it not?! I mean, it does lack the feel

    Good luck


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 8, 2008
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    How immensely creative, grasping and brilliant!!!... x


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 7, 2008
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    Wow. Fabulous!

    Best of luck
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda