Creators' hands burst through barren bedrock
both supplicating and sending forth.
Sewing seeds of love to bloom upon
dejected desolation.
Author notes
20 words on:http://shierly85.deviantart.com/art/Hope-32211529
A contest entry
- Make Them Count by HeavenScent4U.
600 points, ended April 13, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
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This is a nice ekphrastic piece; I like it in the context of the art.
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wow, what a wonderful entry. this pretty well nails the prompt
thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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Seeds of love to bloom in places desolate... I love it. It reminds me of the human heart that may be broken. There is always hope even in the most desolate places something wonderful may burst forth and change it all. This is what I have gotten from this wonderful poem you have written.
Meme
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Wow, I don't know what came first the picture or the poem. Excellent, excellent.
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interesting writ with a positive twist, most admirable that you were able to see anything of goodness in the picture.
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Truly grasps the image concept to me.
Great job on the prompt. Also, superb vocab and flow!
eg ~ Steve
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Oh I love this... The things you create in so few words, just amazing. So very intense. Best wishes in the contest!!!
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Good to 'see' you.
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