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A Tender Kiss.

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My love sent me a tender kiss,
that landed on me,
as soft and gentle,
as a butterfly with aching feet.

It lingered tenderly sweet,
through delirious hours all night.
With parched lips I dared not sip,
less I lose the poignant taste.


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  • poet2angels gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    wow, this is quite unique and lovely...
    TY for entering

    Lynda


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful write, which flows so beautifully. "With parched lips I dared not sip, less I lose the poignant taste". This is such an amazing line. I could feel the love and tenderness here as I was reading through this. WEll done and all the best for the contest.


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    KA-CHING!


  • poppa
    April 8, 2008

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    Beautiful write ....think you have enhanced it superbly...good luck in the contest
    Peace
    Rob..


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 8, 2008
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    RIPPER! Blood-and-sand, Bazza - sometimes you can peel off these shorties like no one else!


    • Bazza
      April 8, 2008
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      Softly as a flutterby.

      Thanks Mairi I love your blood and sand comment as well as the lovely clappies you sent with it.


  • ScarletO gold member
    April 7, 2008

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    How awesomely gentle and soft this poem feels. Love the feeling.

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