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It's good to be Queen

I've been away
for far too long
sorting and seeking some truth.
Clearly it is visible
that not all should be seen
or taken for what it's worth.
I've watched love try to rebuild
and seen the building crumble
only to realize a foundation
was always lacking ...
I took that knowledge
and built a castle.
From this kingdom I see
It's good to be Queen

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  • ellipsist
    June 1, 2008
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    I especially like the way you have chosen to end the piece...


    • MercurialMist
      June 22, 2008
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      Thank you ... it's been so long since I wrote this that I honestly had forgotten ... have missed expressing myself here.