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my easter nighmare

that big white bunny
scares me to the core
and that Sunday nap
he came at me with gore

chased me around
saying my name
he scares me to death
he drives me insane

in this nightmare he sees me alone
he evil fuzzy body is perched upon his thrown
surrounded by eggs and chocolate fun
he calls me over saying come hear Hun

I know its not real
that the bunny is fake
which for me leads to more hate
the bunny is a man
fat and round
being paid with chocolate by the pound

I am safe for now or until the calendar rewinds
so I relax and let my self unwind for I have twelve months
with out that bunny
and that when I realize its kind of funny
I mean come on I’m scared of a bunny

Author notes

when i was little kid i was scared like mindless of the easter bunny
dont ask me why but i was,

option 5

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  • catalyst.
    September 23, 2008
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    Heehee that made me giggle. In some parts the rhyming pattern jumped around a bit but besides that I loved it.
    I think We've all been scared of a costumed man with kids on his lap at one point lol. God knows how we fell for it in the first place. A 7 foot bunny with eye wholes?


  • Meroza
    September 20, 2008

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    Hahahaha, even I am scared of the bunnies. but come on, they are scary! Red eyes, long claws, all bloody and meat eters (They are meat eters, I have proof. My sisters mini bunny ate chicken!)

    Thanks for entering!


  • Darkwell
    August 28, 2008

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    oh this was really so cute and funny clowns freak me out like that

    the bunny is a man
    fat and round
    being paid with chocolate by the pound

    this is just a delicious option #5 WTG good luck in the contest


  • icyrose
    June 4, 2008

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    errr alright...it was a good poem, but a bit of an odd topic eh? Left me a bit perplexed, but it was funny and had good flow. Nice job!


  • Starhiker
    April 20, 2008

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    Great poem, poet!

    I loved this poem, that white bunny scares the willies out of me too. :S I am sure he is evil, and plan to take the world over, one by one easter egg... Seriously, loved the rhymes, and the flow was good. I wish you best of luck in the contest, and I give you three applauses, well deserved! Jim

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